Friday, 12 March 2021

When I'm... poem

 

Here is my poem about what will happen to me when I am different ages. I loved doing it because I got to think about how I would be when I'm older. It was difficult to come up with ideas sometimes. 

What do you want to be when you grow up?

3 comments:

  1. Hi Hibiscus.
    I like your Poem on a Google Slide about what could happen to you as you grow up. It was interesting to read but maybe next time you could double check that you have used capital letters in the right place.
    Blog you later, Xavier.

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  3. Malo e lelei Hibiscus, I am from Room 24 and I really like your slides/work from this becuse it is really helpful to tell us what you are going to be doing when you are turning 10 to 21!! I really love your great confidence on school work!! Nice work Hibiscus and GREAT JOB keep it up with posting very often!! My answer to your question is when I grow up I would want to be a Rugby player and a touch Rugby player... Blog ya later, Lavina

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